Thank you both for your comments, I appreciate them. Re: the title. Yeah, it just seemed to fit. I'd been reading about that concept in Jack Kerouac's _Some of the Dharma_ around the time I wrote this haiku, and it seemed to fit. Although I wouldn't be able to rationally explain *how*. Which is what poetry is all about, I guess.
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ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful, the title is so perfect--not a frame and not an explanation, but just what a title can be, a kind of midrash on the poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you both for your comments, I appreciate them. Re: the title. Yeah, it just seemed to fit. I'd been reading about that concept in Jack Kerouac's _Some of the Dharma_ around the time I wrote this haiku, and it seemed to fit. Although I wouldn't be able to rationally explain *how*. Which is what poetry is all about, I guess.
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